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 Believe it or not, I've added a chapter.  The Errand Lad - Chapter 4 - rabidsamfan - The Lord of the Rings - J. R. R. Tolkien [Archive of Our Own]





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Thinking of Uncle Tilnor at least gave Bergil an idea of something useful he could do.


“Mister Frodo, sir?  Would you like me to fetch you some of the willowbark tea?” Bergil asked hesitantly, blushing at his own presumption.  The Ringbearer's frown deepened again at the words, drawing a fine line between his eyebrows, but he was listening.  Bergil took a deep breath and went on, hoping he wasn’t making a mistake.  “I saved a pot of it in the kitchen, and there’s water hot I could add in, so it won’t be so strong as it was last night.”


“My headache is quite gone,” The smile that the Ringbearer gave Bergil didn’t quite reach his eyes.  “But thank you.”


“I wouldn’t say no to a cup,” Sam’s voice came from beyond the screen.  “Half water and half tea, if you don’t mind, lad.  And a good bit of honey.  Willowbark’s good for more than headaches.”


Now Frodo did smile properly, shaking his head as he looked at Sam.  “If that’s meant to shame me into asking for a cup of my own,” he began, and then he laughed, and it was like the sun coming out from behind the clouds.  “Then it worked.  Prepare two cups if you please, Bergil.  But we’ll come along to the kitchen and add our own honey.”


Bergil nodded, and started to turn before he remembered. “Shouldn’t I pour the water for Mr. Sam’s hair first?” he asked.


“Gandalf did that already,” Frodo said.  


Bergil stared.  “Gandalf?” he squeaked.  Weren’t any of the King’s Companions going to act the way nobles did?  And then he shook himself, all over, to get the questions out of his head and get back to work.  He even remembered to bow, although he could tell Mr. Frodo was doing his best not to laugh.  “I’ll go and get the tea ready, then.  Sir.  Mr. Frodo.” he said, and went to make it true.


Berylla, who’d taken charge of the kitchen when Catrienne had gone back to the palace, even though she was only an apprentice and not even a proper grown up yet,  wouldn’t let Bergil lift the kettle, nor mix the tea himself, and he was still arguing with her about how much water to add when Frodo and Sam came into the kitchen, dressed to go out and about in green-gray cloaks.


“I’m sorry, Mr. Frodo,” Bergil said, when he saw them.  “It’s only almost ready.”  He stopped when Berylla nudged him. She had bent down, and clearly thought Bergil should too, so he bowed very quickly and went on.  “But Berylla didn’t understand why you wanted extra water in the tea and so I had to explain that you didn’t like it so strong.”


“As long as you remembered the honey,” Frodo said, smiling.  “You did remember the honey?”


Bergil relaxed, glad that the hobbits weren’t upset with him. “Yes, sir, Mr. Frodo.”   He fetched the pot from the table.  “It’s here.”


Berylla straightened up, her face red.  “If you will guide me, I shall be glad to prepare the tea to your liking, Ringbearer,” she said, her eyes on her feet.  She looked scared, even though she hadn’t been scared at all of Pippin or Merry earlier.  And when Bergil glanced at Frodo, he was biting his lip, like he was unhappy about something.


Sam stepped forward and took the honey pot from Bergil, tugging at Berylla’s sleeve with his free hand.  “Twas me that brewed it too strong last night, miss,” he said.  “And it’s nothing that hot water and honey can’t mend.  Here, you bring that kettle and pour some water into the cups and I’ll tell you when to stop.”


Once the tea was made, Berylla pulled Bergil over to the wall, where she motioned they were meant to wait silently while the two hobbits drank the brew.  They seemed contented to talk about a green dragon, though, so while they were busy Bergil patted Berylla’s arm.  “Mr. Frodo and Mr. Sam are good at explaining,” he whispered,  “You don’t have to be scared.”


“It’s not them I’m scared of,” she whispered back.


 They hadn’t whispered quietly enough, though, because Mr. Sam stopped in the middle of a sentence and Mr. Frodo pinched the top of his nose.  “Bergil, Berylla, come here,” he said, in a voice that said the willow tea hadn’t worked yet.  “And don’t bow at me!”


Bergil came happily, but Berylla was as red as a strawberry, and nearly bowed anyway.  “Yes, Ringbearer,” she mumbled.


Mr. Frodo’s blue eyes were dark with something that Bergil wasn’t sure he wanted to understand.  “Who,” the hobbit said with strained patience, “do I tell that I have no desire to be constantly reminded of The Ring every time I ask for a cup of tea?”


Berylla’s mouth fell open, but she couldn’t seem to answer, so Bergil spoke up.  “It’s probably Master Tollovand, again, Mr. Frodo. He’s really fussy.”


“And Catrienne,” Berylla added nervously.  “But I think it’s because of Master Tollavand.”


Mr. Frodo sighed.  “Bergil, fetch me paper and pen and ink, if you know where they are to be found.  Berylla, please sit down.  I am not angry with you, but I do have some questions.”


Mr. Sam took Bergil’s arm and hustled him out of the kitchen.  “Come lad, you can show me where the paper and pens are.”


Bergil let himself be hustled, and waited until he and Sam were well away from the kitchen to speak.  “I hope Mister Frodo doesn’t need the paper right away, but I didn’t see where the King found paper before.  But he was in your room, so maybe it’s there,” he said.  “But I can run to the scrivener if we can’t find it.”


Sam smiled but it wasn’t a very happy smile.  “He’s a bit fratchety this morning, right enough.  But no matter.  I expect Strider went along to Gandalf for paper and pen this morning.  Which room is that, do you know?”


“The one on the left.”  Bergil led Sam to the door, and knocked, even though he knew the wizard had gone to the palace with the others, just in case.  “Do you think  Mithrandir will be angry if we just go in?” he asked.  Having a wizard angry with him was probably worse than even having Master Tollovand angry.


“We were all in each other’s pockets on the road from Rivendell,” Sam said easily, pushing open the door.  “And Gandalf won’t mind if he knows it’s for Mr Frodo.”  Bergil waited in the corridor, hoping not to have to go in himself, as Sam clambered up the chair by the table and rummaged a moment before saying ‘ah’.  “Come here and carry the inkpot,” he told Bergil.  “I don’t want to spill it.”


Torn between curiosity and trepidation, Bergil scooted forward, craning his neck around the door. But there was only a bed with its curtains drawn, and nothing magical at all to see.  Unless perhaps the magic was in the books and scrolls piled onto the table where Sam was waiting for him.  “Did Mithrandir do magic to get you into his pocket?” he asked, taking the inkpot and holding it carefully as Sam jumped down with paper and pen.


Sam gave a shout of laughter.  “Now that would have been something!  A good deal less walking for some and a good deal more to carry for the rest.  But no,” he nudged Bergil out into the corridor and bade him wait while he secured the door.  “Being in each other’s pockets means we shared what we had to make the journey easier.  Gandalf kept a record of the days.  That’s how I knew he had a pen.  He’d mix up a little ink each morning, no more than he needed, and write in his book.”


Bergil peered into the brimming inkpot.  “He must have decided to write a lot of things today.”


“I expect so,” Sam said, leading the way back to the kitchen.  “There’s been a good deal that’s happened of late.”


Berylla was smiling by the time they returned, and had fetched over the bowl of peas for shelling to the table, her hands busy at the task as she said, “Not that I’ve ever heard, Mr. Frodo.  But there are so many storehouses full, I expect that I could find something like it.”


Mr Frodo turned to Sam, and he looked less upset now. “They don’t have oats here, Sam!  At least not by that name. Small wonder there was no porridge with breakfast.”


“We’ll have to make do with pease I expect, Mr Frodo.  Here’s paper and pen for you.”


“And ink,” Bergil said, placing it carefully on the table away from any elbows.  “But if oats is something that grows, Mardil will know if we have any.  He knows everything about plants.  Well, almost everything,” he added, remembering that it was Ioreth who had known where Bergil should look to find someone who might have kingsfoil.  “But he’ll know about plants we like to eat for certain.  He’s the herbmaster, you see.”


“So I’ve been told,” Mr. Frodo said with a corner of his mouth turning up, even as he was writing.  "You mentioned him in the middle of the night."


“So I did,” Mr. Sam agreed.  “And seeing as Strider wants us to go along and see his gardens, I expect you’ll meet him before long.”



“Just let me finish this.”  Mr. Frodo wrote a bit more and blew on the ink to dry it.  “Bergil, fetch me a candle, please.”


“They’re on the highest shelf left of the basin,” Berylla said quickly, as if she were glad to have something she knew how to do.  “I’ll get one for you, sir.”


“Thank you.”  Mr Frodo nodded to her.  He looked over his note again.  “What do you think of this, Sam?  ‘To Whom It May Concern, I have instructed the people who have been assigned to my service that they should address me as Mr. Frodo, or sir, and need not bow at every turn’.”


Sam’s cheeks reddened and he bit his lip around a grin.  “It suits me, well enough, Mr. Frodo, but I expect the others might have a word to say.  Especially Strider.”


“He might, at that, but I am not he,” Frodo said, adding his signature with a flourish.   “There.”  He folded the paper and sealed it with a drip from the candle that Berylla had lit at the fire.  “Keep that in your pocket, and if anyone chastises you for addressing me as I wish, show it to them,” he said, handing the paper to Berylla.  “Bergil, I will write a note for you and the other lads as well, but as Sam has reminded me, we are expected to go to see the herbmaster this morning.  Are you ready to go?”


“Yes, Mr Frodo,” Bergil said, hoping that Ansell would know to empty the bath.  “I’m ready.”


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And if you remember A Question/Matter of Trust with Sherlock Holmes the new chapter is over at AO3.

A Question of Trust - Chapter 3 - rabidsamfan - Sherlock Holmes - Arthur Conan Doyle [Archive of Our Own]

And yes, I'm poking at the Errand Lad too.  (Among other things.)

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It's like this. I'm still trying to decide which WIP for the bigbang. I'd really like to try doing it because I might actually snag some artwork for one of the stories, but that's actually made it a bit harder to decide.

So, here are the factors for each story:

The Errand Lad. (Lord of the Rings) Currently at 23119 words, without a scrap sitting in rough draft form, and last worked on Jan 10, 2006. Has 6 people who remember it and still visit my LJ, and was fairly notorious in its day. There may be artists out there, especially since the Hobbit movies are raising fandom interest slightly. Rereading it I really enjoyed myself, spotted some inconsistencies to the source *sigh* and found myself still uncertain how to get to where I wanted to go.

A Question of Trust. (Sherlock Holmes ACD, mildly AU) Currently at 7380 words posted out of 10100 words in the google doc and the last posting was 8 July 2008. Has 5 people who remember it and still visit my LJ, and is part of a series I really should continue working on. Because it is Sherlock Holmes it has a fairly good chance of snagging artwork. Rereading it I enjoyed myself, wondered if I could find the voice again, and realized that I either need to do some serious research or vigorous handwaving in order to finish it.

Alternate Ending to Dirtier by the Dozen. (The New Avengers) Currently at 30,014 words posted out of 54791 words in the google doc. The last post was on 12 Dec 2008, just before I jammed on a key scene. Two votes of being remembered in the poll, and practically no chance of artwork as the fandom is very very tiny. Rereading it I got caught up in the story again, actually thought of a possible way out of the scene which had me stuck before, and still wasn't quite sure how to reach the denoument.

So, not a clear decision in the least. Hence, I'm going to thrown this out to the potential audiences. If I go for this, I'll need a beta (who would need to be willing to listen to me creeb about the plots and make suggestions), and a possible artist (even if said artwork only consists of finding some pictures from the sources which kind of sort of could fit at a few places in the story.) And a cheering section. Oh, yes...

[Poll #1954829]

[Poll #1954830]

[Poll #1954831]

(I should make it clear that possible artists wouldn't be making a commitment straight away to my story, just to also signing up for the bigbang and finding something to illustrate.)
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
By the time everyone, including Dr. Whittaker, Dr. Elliott, and the snowplow driver, who was waiting for his cast to set sufficiently hard for traveling, had gotten some breakfast, the sky had brightened as much as it was going to. But the snow was still coming down, even though cars inched their way along the main street and the muted roar of plows could be heard from the nearby highway. Mollie turned up in mukluks and an ancient parka, and she and Terry and Ernie started setting the place to rights and sterilizing the used equipment. Trapper checked over Gonzo and Stanley a little more carefully after he'd had his morning coffee, and got Dr. Elliott to take a look at the frostbite and Carson to look at Stanley's head. Then they sat down to debate whether or not to try to get Stanley and Gonzo down to San Francisco Memorial. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
By the time everyone, including Dr. Whittaker, Dr. Elliott, and the snowplow driver, who was waiting for his cast to set sufficiently hard for traveling, had gotten some breakfast, the sky had brightened as much as it was going to. But the snow was still coming down, even though cars inched their way along the main street and the muted roar of plows could be heard from the nearby highway. Mollie turned up in mukluks and an ancient parka, and she and Terry and Ernie started setting the place to rights and sterilizing the used equipment. Trapper checked over Gonzo and Stanley a little more carefully after he'd had his morning coffee, and got Dr. Elliott to take a look at the frostbite and Carson to look at Stanley's head. Then they sat down to debate whether or not to try to get Stanley and Gonzo down to San Francisco Memorial. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
Coffee is a good thing, Ernie thought as she looked out at the snow tumbling lazily down past the streetlights. The sky was only just starting to lighten behind the overcast. She'd caught a nap for a couple of hours while Carson watched over the three men, but the arrival of Dr. Elliott and a snowplow driver with a sprained ankle had wakened her. She took another sip and composed herself for the morning. Regardless of the weather, none of them were going to be able to get back to San Francisco in time for the morning shift. And with snow still falling, there wasn't going to be a helicopter coming to change that. She would have to call. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
Coffee is a good thing, Ernie thought as she looked out at the snow tumbling lazily down past the streetlights. The sky was only just starting to lighten behind the overcast. She'd caught a nap for a couple of hours while Carson watched over the three men, but the arrival of Dr. Elliott and a snowplow driver with a sprained ankle had wakened her. She took another sip and composed herself for the morning. Regardless of the weather, none of them were going to be able to get back to San Francisco in time for the morning shift. And with snow still falling, there wasn't going to be a helicopter coming to change that. She would have to call. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
Trapper had made the incision, and was fussing with a primitive drill when Ernie got into the room that they were using as an operating theater. She paused a moment to settle her stomach. They had propped Stanley on his stomach, with his torso supported by a thick layer of blankets while his feet and hands trailed in pans of water. Trapper and Dr. Elliott were working at Stanley's head, while Terry passed instruments and Gary carefully worked on the frost-damaged extremities and renewed the hot water bottles that were bringing Stanley's core temperature back up to something reasonable, and Steve sat working the anesthesia.

Ernie made her way to Terry. "Where do you want me?"

"Here," Terry gave her the tray. "You pass the silverware while I work with Gary. It'll help if we can get his temperature stabilized."

"Right." Ernie took up her position. It was her first chance to get a good look at the damage, and she was appalled. Stanley's face was puffy with fluid and he had the ‘raccoon mask' of bruising that indicated serious cerebral hemorrhaging. Most of the back of his head was purple with subcutaneous bleeding as well, and past Trapper's shoulder she could see the jagged edges of a hole right through the bone. The x-rays on the light box weren't reassuring, except in that there was no sign of whatever had pierced the skull. The blood coming out was dark and viscous. Ernie guessed that Stanley could have been bleeding into the brain since last night and her heart sank. This was not good. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
Trapper had made the incision, and was fussing with a primitive drill when Ernie got into the room that they were using as an operating theater. She paused a moment to settle her stomach. They had propped Stanley on his stomach, with his torso supported by a thick layer of blankets while his feet and hands trailed in pans of water. Trapper and Dr. Elliott were working at Stanley's head, while Terry passed instruments and Gary carefully worked on the frost-damaged extremities and renewed the hot water bottles that were bringing Stanley's core temperature back up to something reasonable, and Steve sat working the anesthesia.

Ernie made her way to Terry. "Where do you want me?"

"Here," Terry gave her the tray. "You pass the silverware while I work with Gary. It'll help if we can get his temperature stabilized."

"Right." Ernie took up her position. It was her first chance to get a good look at the damage, and she was appalled. Stanley's face was puffy with fluid and he had the ‘raccoon mask' of bruising that indicated serious cerebral hemorrhaging. Most of the back of his head was purple with subcutaneous bleeding as well, and past Trapper's shoulder she could see the jagged edges of a hole right through the bone. The x-rays on the light box weren't reassuring, except in that there was no sign of whatever had pierced the skull. The blood coming out was dark and viscous. Ernie guessed that Stanley could have been bleeding into the brain since last night and her heart sank. This was not good. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
"Avalanche rods, snowshoes, emergency medical kit, sleeping bags, 2 Stokes stretchers, rope and climbing gear, headlamps, helmets, ice picks, crampons, primus stove, water, food, and you've got on your long underwear and heavy boots, right?" Houlihan looked up from the pile of gear he had assembled on the living room floor, strapped neatly into the Stokes stretchers -- light aluminum stretchers designed for mountain rescue. "We may be up there into the night."

"I'm ready," Trapper said grimly.

"Ray's going to take the chopper to check the other roads into the park, but the pass road is ours. It'll take an hour for district to get anyone else up here, so we'll do the initial survey. Here, attach this to your coat, and when we get up to the avalanche area, all you'll have to do is string it out behind you."

Trapper looked at the long orange nylon ribbon with mixed emotions. If only Stanley and Gonzo had avalanche cords, the odds of finding them before the spring thaw would be.... He killed the thought. Time enough to give up when they had made the effort first.

Houlihan took the front end of the stacked stretchers and Trapper caught a hold of the back. "Are we taking the snowmobiles?"

"Yes, the Jimmy would never make it if we have to go up where the avalanche has crossed the road." Houlihan answered. He set a course straight for the shed, but Trapper, following behind, looked over his shoulder at the mountain. And stopped. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
"Avalanche rods, snowshoes, emergency medical kit, sleeping bags, 2 Stokes stretchers, rope and climbing gear, headlamps, helmets, ice picks, crampons, primus stove, water, food, and you've got on your long underwear and heavy boots, right?" Houlihan looked up from the pile of gear he had assembled on the living room floor, strapped neatly into the Stokes stretchers -- light aluminum stretchers designed for mountain rescue. "We may be up there into the night."

"I'm ready," Trapper said grimly.

"Ray's going to take the chopper to check the other roads into the park, but the pass road is ours. It'll take an hour for district to get anyone else up here, so we'll do the initial survey. Here, attach this to your coat, and when we get up to the avalanche area, all you'll have to do is string it out behind you."

Trapper looked at the long orange nylon ribbon with mixed emotions. If only Stanley and Gonzo had avalanche cords, the odds of finding them before the spring thaw would be.... He killed the thought. Time enough to give up when they had made the effort first.

Houlihan took the front end of the stacked stretchers and Trapper caught a hold of the back. "Are we taking the snowmobiles?"

"Yes, the Jimmy would never make it if we have to go up where the avalanche has crossed the road." Houlihan answered. He set a course straight for the shed, but Trapper, following behind, looked over his shoulder at the mountain. And stopped. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
"Well, I can smell something burning, anyway," Gonzo said, patting Stan on the back. "You're making progress."

"It just won't burn," Stanley fretted. "I've tried and tried, and all I get is a few sparks."

"Maybe the kindling isn't small enough," Gonzo said. "You've got to start with the littlest stuff first."

"I'm just useless. I don't know anything practical. I don't know anything but doctor stuff," Stanley started to turn away, and Gonzo had to keep a hold of him. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
"Well, I can smell something burning, anyway," Gonzo said, patting Stan on the back. "You're making progress."

"It just won't burn," Stanley fretted. "I've tried and tried, and all I get is a few sparks."

"Maybe the kindling isn't small enough," Gonzo said. "You've got to start with the littlest stuff first."

"I'm just useless. I don't know anything practical. I don't know anything but doctor stuff," Stanley started to turn away, and Gonzo had to keep a hold of him. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
"Frosty the snowman was a jolly happy soul," Gonzo sang hoarsely, "With a corncob hat and button pipe and two eyes made out of coal."

"I don't think that's the right words," Stanley interrupted crankily. "It's a button nose. And corncobs are too little for hats."

"So let's sing something different, then," Gonzo agreed, amiably. He was pleased that Stan had noticed the mix-up. It's not easy to test someone's coherence when they're walking behind you.

"I'm tired of singing," Stanley said. "And your voice is going."

"Well, I'm thirsty," Gonzo admitted. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
"Frosty the snowman was a jolly happy soul," Gonzo sang hoarsely, "With a corncob hat and button pipe and two eyes made out of coal."

"I don't think that's the right words," Stanley interrupted crankily. "It's a button nose. And corncobs are too little for hats."

"So let's sing something different, then," Gonzo agreed, amiably. He was pleased that Stan had noticed the mix-up. It's not easy to test someone's coherence when they're walking behind you.

"I'm tired of singing," Stanley said. "And your voice is going."

"Well, I'm thirsty," Gonzo admitted. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
The phone rang again, and Trapper gave up and brought the whole coffeepot out from the kitchen. "Mendocino South Ranger Station," he said, tucking the receiver between his ear and his shoulder so he would have both hands free to pour the coffee.

"I'm trying to reach John McIntyre?"

"Speaking."

"My name is Pat Flaherty; I'm with the San Francisco office of the Federal Bureau of Investigations. I've been talking to Lt. Bristow in Sacramento, and I just wanted to confirm some points with you. Is the Stanley Riverside you're looking for any relation to Stanley Riverside the businessman?"

"His son," Trapper said, grateful that the agent seemed to know that much at least.

"Ayuh, that's rich enough." The New England voice paused for a moment, and Trapper heard the scratching of a pen. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
The phone rang again, and Trapper gave up and brought the whole coffeepot out from the kitchen. "Mendocino South Ranger Station," he said, tucking the receiver between his ear and his shoulder so he would have both hands free to pour the coffee.

"I'm trying to reach John McIntyre?"

"Speaking."

"My name is Pat Flaherty; I'm with the San Francisco office of the Federal Bureau of Investigations. I've been talking to Lt. Bristow in Sacramento, and I just wanted to confirm some points with you. Is the Stanley Riverside you're looking for any relation to Stanley Riverside the businessman?"

"His son," Trapper said, grateful that the agent seemed to know that much at least.

"Ayuh, that's rich enough." The New England voice paused for a moment, and Trapper heard the scratching of a pen. )
rabidsamfan: (Stanley)
Gonzo felt his feet going out from under him again and tried to let go of Stanley's coat in time to avoid pulling the other man down on top of him. He hadn't the last time, and the collision had knocked the breath out of both of them. He had limited success. As he hit the snow with knee and hip and elbow, he heard Stanley landing too, but at least this time they weren't one on top of the other. "Sorry," Gonzo said.

"‘S all right," Stanley sounded winded. "‘S a chance to sit down."

Content not to have to move right away, Gonzo hitched himself around until he was in a comfortable sitting position on the slanted snow bank. The road had been covered in more than one place by slides, and negotiating them was taking more energy than he had to spare. He held onto his knees to keep his hands away from his face and tried to reckon their odds. Less than ten miles, but in knee-deep snow, very little water, no food. )

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