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More of the wandering story

part one
part two


“I doubt you have, lad. Or you wouldn’t have been given the honor,” Sam offered gently, and Bergil looked to see if he meant it or was just being nice.

“But how can it be an honor if no one’s awake to see?” he asked.

“Seems to me your Master Tollovand trusts you to do your work without him there,” Sam said. “And that’s high honor.”

“I never thought of it that way,” Bergil admitted. “That he was trusting me, I mean.”

“Well my Gaffer didn’t trust me in the garden on my own ‘til he was sure I’d do more good than harm,” Sam said. “Nor my Mam in the kitchen ‘til I could bake the bread. I won‘t say it isn‘t sweet to hear your deeds be praised, but it‘s doing your best that matters, not whether or not anyone looks to see.”

Bergil felt his face heat. But what Sam had said made sense and it made him feel better. He thought about it as he ducked past the rows of drying clothing that hung in the passageway, and Sam followed along, equally silent. But it wasn’t far to go until they came to the wall of the garden that surrounded the Houses of Healing.

Bergil turned right and followed the wall to the easiest place to climb before he handed the lantern to Sam. “When I get to the top you can pass it up to me, and then come up too,” he said.

Sam chuckled. “I had a feeling we weren’t heading to the front door.”

“Oh, this is better,” Bergil assured him. “This takes us right to the herbiary, and you don’t have to go through any of the wards on the way.” He frowned remembering some of the things he had seen in the wards over the past few weeks. “If you don’t want to climb though, I can take you back around the long way.”

Sam looked up at the wall, which was only a foot or so taller than Bergil was himself, his eyes seeking out the footholds and handholds “I’ve climbed worse,” he said, almost to himself. “And at least this won’t have a great ugly spider at the top.”

Bergil scrambled up and lay on top of the wall so he could reach down for the light. “There are little spiders in the garden,” he said. “But the Herbmaster says they won’t bother you if you don’t bother them.”

“A garden is it?” Sam’s eyes lit up. “On the other side of the wall?”

“Uh huh,” Bergil said. “Can’t you smell it?”

The perian -- hobbit -- took a deep sniff of the night air, closing his eyes to savor the threaded scents of dew damp grass and turned earth. “Aye, so I can.”

part four

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Date: 2004-12-08 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-wonderer.livejournal.com
Oh I love the way Sam managed to make Bergil feel better about his night time duty. So like Sam to have stories from home that would apply. I am also very glad that there is a garden. I can see Sam checking it out and maybe having some ideas for it's improvement or just coming by later in the day to enjoy it. Great story and I am very glad that you are continuing it.

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Date: 2004-12-08 03:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] notabluemaia.livejournal.com
Yes, he's climbed far worse... This is so vivid that *I* can smell the garden! And won't that do Sam some good - I hope as much as he's doing for the lad. Lovely. Thank you!

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Date: 2004-12-12 04:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Can't you see Sam having trouble sleeping because it doesn't smell right? After sleeping every night in Ithilien for a month he must really miss the good green breeze.

(I'm cheating slightly, and only answering the most recent comment I can find for folks, but I've read them all, honest! And preened, preened, preened...)

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Date: 2004-12-08 04:27 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] dreamflower
“I’ve climbed worse,” he said, almost to himself. “And at least this won’t have a great ugly spider at the top.” LOL! I could just *see* Sam delivering that line!

This is great so far. I love the interaction between the two, and Sam's easy way with the lad. I do hope to see more soon!

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Date: 2004-12-08 05:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] febobe.livejournal.com
*CRIES*

Awwwwwwwwww!!!!

I look eagerly for more of this every night, like a greedy hobbit-child scraping a dish of mushrooms. . . . :D

*huggies delightedly*

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Date: 2004-12-08 05:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lame-pegasus.livejournal.com
Very fine, dear... this is getting better and better. Bergil is very believable, and I love how Sam interacts with him.

*waits for the next part*

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Date: 2004-12-08 09:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elycia.livejournal.com
::swoons::

Oh, how I'm loving this! Sam, as you write him, is always a joy; in this story, he's even more charming than usual. I may need an antidote!

::joins queue waiting for next part::

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Date: 2004-12-08 09:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illyria-novia.livejournal.com
Sam chuckled. “I had a feeling we weren’t heading to the front door.”

“Oh, this is better,” Bergil assured him.


Mwahahaha! If I hadn't been fond of Bergil before, this would've made me an ardent fan. :)

And I love how you depict Sam's easy camaraderie with Bergil, something hovering between patronizing (he's getting a bit more like the Gaffer than he likes to think, I guess *smiles*) and being naturally friendly and trusting.

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Date: 2004-12-08 11:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jewelsong.livejournal.com
This is excellent!

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Date: 2004-12-12 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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Date: 2004-12-08 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unhobbityhobbit.livejournal.com
You must get a real nose for soil when there isn't much around.

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Date: 2004-12-12 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
I suspect that Sam finds Minas Tirith as sterile as Legolas does. Tolkien essentially describes the greensward and gardens by the Houses of Healing as the only place in the city where that sort of thing exists!

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Date: 2004-12-08 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] archerlass.livejournal.com
I am really enjoying this.
*settles back for the ride*
:)

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Date: 2004-12-12 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Ride? Ride? What do you mean no brakes!

(I'm having fun too! Now if I can just find the steering wheel!)

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Date: 2005-01-26 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cpsings4him.livejournal.com
Ah! This was lovely! From Sam comforting Bergil about his night duty and helping him see the honor in it to Sam enjoying the scent of damp grass and turned earth again.

Sam looked up at the wall, which was only a foot or so taller than Bergil was himself, his eyes seeking out the footholds and handholds “I’ve climbed worse,” he said, almost to himself. “And at least this won’t have a great ugly spider at the top.”

I loved that bit!

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