succumbed to temptation part 2
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rabidsamfanHome sick, and found the link to
he had seen her eyes
shining in the firelight
her back straight and proud
and then he saw the
trees and the blade fell from his
nerveless fingers
i must go now
to see the mountains again
while I still can
and wept not knowing
if he wept for smeagol or
sam or for himself
and what kept him so
long this time i don't know
he drives himself
but she was worried
and he wanted to talk to
sam in any case
and when the cold night
came and we had no blanket
i kept him warm
sun so thin in the
sky it couldn't hardly be
said to be shinin
frodo, said the old
hobbit unoffended he
might listen to you
her golden hair had
dimmed in the shadows and
her face had gone cold
but the frost was on
her now and to warm her was
to make her shatter
their friends jostled by
gathering millgrom up and
yattering about
how could he deny
her she whom he had loved
since first she smiled
bold already and
strong her small teeth bright as snow
on autumn leaves
besides I’m just
a ninnyhammer good
for nowt sensible.
gollum hadn't had
no more food or water than
we had ourselves
ficlet novel filk
or poetry i want to
know if it's torment
frodo waved it
aside I don’t mind sam you
can’t sleep in all that.
i don’t mind sam you
can’t sleep in all that. i did
on the road, sam said
frodo i hope
that was the right thing to do
i'm sure it was sam
on the tears that hung
precariously in the
corners of his eyes
there must hardly be
a village in the shire
that hadn't seen sam
there was gollum still
ready to strike and i
had sting in my hand
we had still a
long way to go to mordor
and he chose to come
a sound sleep and
the first good bed you’d seen in
a long time.
can i marry
him when he doesn’t even see
me make him see you
frodo started to
crawl and i couldn't do
more than crawl behind
scrabbled in the dirt
and begged for the last few
minutes of life
he'd go to dust once
the ring was destroyed you see
and i knew it
but it will require
something -- something
i cannot give
his eye following
the line of small saplings that
should have been tall trees
fantastic icon
i'm going to be signing on
just to look at it
just hitting the button over and over again, finding snippets that worked and wishing it didn't go randomly so I could see if the kiss turned out poetic or not. I never did find out, tho...
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he had seen her eyes
shining in the firelight
her back straight and proud
and then he saw the
trees and the blade fell from his
nerveless fingers
i must go now
to see the mountains again
while I still can
and wept not knowing
if he wept for smeagol or
sam or for himself
and what kept him so
long this time i don't know
he drives himself
but she was worried
and he wanted to talk to
sam in any case
and when the cold night
came and we had no blanket
i kept him warm
sun so thin in the
sky it couldn't hardly be
said to be shinin
frodo, said the old
hobbit unoffended he
might listen to you
her golden hair had
dimmed in the shadows and
her face had gone cold
but the frost was on
her now and to warm her was
to make her shatter
their friends jostled by
gathering millgrom up and
yattering about
how could he deny
her she whom he had loved
since first she smiled
bold already and
strong her small teeth bright as snow
on autumn leaves
besides I’m just
a ninnyhammer good
for nowt sensible.
gollum hadn't had
no more food or water than
we had ourselves
ficlet novel filk
or poetry i want to
know if it's torment
frodo waved it
aside I don’t mind sam you
can’t sleep in all that.
i don’t mind sam you
can’t sleep in all that. i did
on the road, sam said
frodo i hope
that was the right thing to do
i'm sure it was sam
on the tears that hung
precariously in the
corners of his eyes
there must hardly be
a village in the shire
that hadn't seen sam
there was gollum still
ready to strike and i
had sting in my hand
we had still a
long way to go to mordor
and he chose to come
a sound sleep and
the first good bed you’d seen in
a long time.
can i marry
him when he doesn’t even see
me make him see you
frodo started to
crawl and i couldn't do
more than crawl behind
scrabbled in the dirt
and begged for the last few
minutes of life
he'd go to dust once
the ring was destroyed you see
and i knew it
but it will require
something -- something
i cannot give
his eye following
the line of small saplings that
should have been tall trees
fantastic icon
i'm going to be signing on
just to look at it
just hitting the button over and over again, finding snippets that worked and wishing it didn't go randomly so I could see if the kiss turned out poetic or not. I never did find out, tho...
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Date: 2004-04-01 02:26 pm (UTC)Some of those haiku are pretty interesting!
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Date: 2004-04-01 02:46 pm (UTC)too tired to write and quite bored
I'd rather work