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Two weeks of sleeping, if Gandalf were right, and you’d have thought that would be enough to prove that it was safe enough to sleep the night through. But the noisy Man feet of the guards outside the grove sounded worse in darkness; the jangle of mail and creak of leather too close for comfort, until Sam hitched himself up against the headboard and Frodo could see brown eyes glittering wakefully in the dim starlight, and feel a hand resting warm on his shoulder. He sighed, and smiled, and let sleep come.

At midnight, he awoke and they traded places.



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Date: 2004-07-08 04:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gwaith.livejournal.com
Gah, this pulled at my heartstrings. How hard it must have been for them to realize that it was indeed safe to sleep without having to have one keep watch.

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Date: 2004-07-10 12:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Yeah. Habits are hard to break.

Thanks!

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Date: 2004-07-08 05:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lame-pegasus.livejournal.com
...and Frodo could see brown eyes glittering wakefully in the dim starlight, and feel a hand resting warm on his shoulder. He sighed, and smiled, and let sleep come.

And he's able to sleep because he knows that Sam is on his guard. My, this is beautiful, and sad, and comforting, all the same time. Thank you!

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Date: 2004-07-10 12:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
You're welcome! They've just had to be so careful for so long -- and I expect that once the feast and all is done that Aragorn is getting some well earned sleep himself, and the others have grown used to the sounds that an armed camp makes at night.

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Date: 2004-07-08 06:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illyria-novia.livejournal.com
I'm at a loss for word. As always the details of why they can't sleep, the simplicity and poignancy of solution to the problem and above else the way you descibe the implicit love and understanding between the two hobbits amaze and touch me deeply. This is lovely; it hurts, but lovely nonetheless.

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Date: 2004-07-10 12:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
I wish I could be as eloquent as you are when I'm at a loss for words! *grin*

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

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Date: 2004-07-08 07:09 am (UTC)
ancalime8301: viola (safe)
From: [personal profile] ancalime8301
Awww...

And I especially liked this line: At midnight, he awoke and they traded places because so often Sam stayed awake the entire time while they were still travelling (or at least, that's the impression I got, but it's been a while since I've reread...), so having Frodo actually awake and watching is part of what makes it real that the journey is over.

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Date: 2004-07-10 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Frodo took his turn in Mordor, watching while Sam slept, but I've always gotten the impression that Sam took the longer watch whenever he could. Still, they're used to sleeping turn and turn about...

Thanks!

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Date: 2004-07-08 08:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melilot-hill.livejournal.com
That was really beautiful. It must be so hard for them to find trust again.

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Date: 2004-07-10 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Except in each other.

Thanks!

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Date: 2004-07-08 11:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lullenny.livejournal.com
Oh, this is a gem. Someone above mentioned simplicity and poignancy; let me add 'restraint'. I think the simple restraint allowed the poignancy to zing so well, bittersweet.

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Date: 2004-07-10 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Restraint is easy when you've only got a hundred words!

Thanks.

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Date: 2004-07-08 11:44 am (UTC)
shirebound: (Frodo and Sam B/W)
From: [personal profile] shirebound
I especially love how these two can now communicate without words. Wonderful.

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Date: 2004-07-10 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Who needs words? And it would never occur to them to bother the guards and ask them to be quieter, would it?

Thanks!

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Date: 2004-07-08 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cpsings4him.livejournal.com
What can I say but that I love this!

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Date: 2004-07-10 12:07 am (UTC)

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Date: 2004-07-08 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gentlehobbit.livejournal.com
This... oh, this is good. Everyone above has said well what I felt in response to this drabble. I suppose that my response, then, would be a liberal helping of [livejournal.com profile] illyria_novia with a dash of [livejournal.com profile] ancalime8301 and [livejournal.com profile] shirebound. :)

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Date: 2004-07-10 12:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you! *grinning at the wonderful "mixed" review*

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Date: 2004-07-08 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
You drabble like no one else. *applause*

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Date: 2004-07-10 12:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Thank you. But I still get stunned by other drabbles. [livejournal.com profile] teasel did one today that knocked my socks off...

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Date: 2004-07-10 02:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Oh, yes, she also drabbles magnificently. But so do you. I'm glad to be able to read both your drabbles. :)

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Date: 2004-07-09 08:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tialys.livejournal.com
Beautiful and an amazing glimpse to look at. I could never really pick a favorite line, but I love how the last one finalized the whole scene and showed the full situation. Wonderful job!

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Date: 2004-07-10 12:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Thank you. Isn't it fun finding little corners of the story to write about?

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