More Merry
May. 27th, 2004 11:12 pmRed Blade
When Tom Bombadil gave me my sword I felt awkward with it, like I was playing at Heroes and Dragons the way that lads do while their chores are waiting.
When Boromir offered to teach me to use my sword I was nervous, but pleased with the lessons in case they might prove useful.
When Aragorn returned my sword to me at Isengard I was grateful and glad to feel the weight of it again on my belt where it belonged.
When Eowyn stumbled my sword was in my hand and I struck without a thought.
I miss my sword.
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When Tom Bombadil gave me my sword I felt awkward with it, like I was playing at Heroes and Dragons the way that lads do while their chores are waiting.
When Boromir offered to teach me to use my sword I was nervous, but pleased with the lessons in case they might prove useful.
When Aragorn returned my sword to me at Isengard I was grateful and glad to feel the weight of it again on my belt where it belonged.
When Eowyn stumbled my sword was in my hand and I struck without a thought.
I miss my sword.
Timeline (fiction only, most recent version, includes AU) first previous next last
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Date: 2004-05-28 07:30 am (UTC)Now, how about Sting?
:)
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Date: 2004-05-28 02:55 pm (UTC)glad you liked it!
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Date: 2004-05-28 08:49 am (UTC)Great - thank you!
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Date: 2004-05-28 02:56 pm (UTC)glad you liked it!
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Date: 2004-05-28 12:45 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-05-28 02:57 pm (UTC)Thanks!
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Date: 2004-05-28 01:50 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-05-28 02:58 pm (UTC)Thanks
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Date: 2004-05-28 03:07 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-05-28 08:06 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-05-28 08:08 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-05-28 05:53 pm (UTC)'Vive Rabid! Vive Rabid!!'
lol
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Date: 2004-05-28 08:07 pm (UTC)*wonders briefly about being called rabid, but admits she picked the name after all*
*grin*
LOL!
Date: 2004-05-28 08:09 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-05-28 06:13 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-05-28 08:08 pm (UTC)thank you
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Date: 2004-05-28 06:28 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-05-28 08:08 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-05-28 08:48 pm (UTC)There is such an effective, clear development of Merry's feelings, and such a simple, matter-of-fact comment at the end which shows both his attachment, but lack of dependency on it.
Nicely done! :)
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Date: 2004-05-28 11:18 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-05-29 01:32 am (UTC)