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holiday droubble

[livejournal.com profile] duckie_710 wanted one from Marigold's point of view.




I’m measuring out the flour for the morning’s baking when Miss Pervinca comes to find me. “It’s Pippin!” she cries, swinging me round with tears in her eyes and laughter in her voice. “He’s been seen riding up the back way from Bywater!”

“Are they sure?” I can’t help but ask, not wanting to hope just yet. “Is he alone?”

“I don’t know, but it won’t take long to find out,” she counters, pulling me out to the courtyard apron and all. Half the hobbits in the Smials are tumbling out of doors, but we are ahead of them and reach the watch tower first.

Then out of the trees we see them come, not one alone but seven, not one of them the right shape or size. In the lead rides a fine straight figure on a pony like none I’ve seen in the Shire. He’s wearing black over something that glints like metal in the light of the torches at the gate. Not till he pushes back his hood can we recognize his bright curls.

“Pippin!” Pervinca calls, and he waves back, grinning like he’d never left at all.

That’s one of our brothers safe at any road.

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Date: 2004-11-29 07:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-wonderer.livejournal.com
Wonderful. You are so good at these. I could see it all and I love Pervinca's enthusiasm.

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Date: 2004-11-29 01:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
They had to have been wild with worry about Pippin and the others, don't you think? Thanks!

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Date: 2004-11-29 08:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lame-pegasus.livejournal.com
Yay Pippin! Three cheers for the returning hero! (Extremely well done, the reader almost wants to jump up and down with excitement along with Pervinca)

1:30 a.m.? Go to sleep, woman, or you'll end up as red- and owleyed as me. *grins*

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Date: 2004-11-29 01:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Oh, good. And I did go to bed right after I posted this...

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Date: 2004-11-29 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
Pippin! *cheer*

Tiny question: what is Marigold doing at Great Smials?

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Date: 2004-11-29 01:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
I had to put her somewhere -- and she's conspicuously absent in Bywater and Hobbiton when thet Travellers get home or she would have been taking care of the Gaffer.

I figure she went to work for a year or two to save up a dowry, and why not as a cook for the Tooks? It keeps her safe through the troubles, after all...

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Date: 2004-12-04 04:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
I like this idea! (Yeah, she is conspicuously absent from Hobbiton when Sam returns. )

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Date: 2004-12-04 05:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Yes. And we know that Tookland is sealed off -- no one is getting in or out. So presumably Tom Cotton would be nudging his folks to take care of the Gaffer, since neither Sam nor Mari is around to do it. (It would also explain why Sam's not worried about her, if she were settled somewhere in a job before he left.)

It wouldn't be unreasonable for a girl of Mari's class to want to earn a bit of money for her dowry. And given how good a cook Sam is, I thought it would make sense for her to go as a cook's assistant rather than an undermaid.

Wanna play with the bunny? You're good at Scouring stories.

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Date: 2004-11-29 01:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lily-the-hobbit.livejournal.com
That's a very nice piece! Marvellous how much emotion you can put into 100 words.

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Date: 2004-11-29 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Well, 200 in this instance. *grin* Thanks!

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Date: 2004-11-29 03:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elendiari22.livejournal.com
Hurrah for Pippin!

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Date: 2004-11-29 07:14 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2004-11-30 01:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] duckie-710.livejournal.com
Yay! Pervinca sounds so happy. Quite a lovely droubble. Thanks for taking my suggestion. :)

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Date: 2004-11-30 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Thank you for making it. It's fun to have to stretch my writing wings like this!
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