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[rabidsamfan]

Racing Darkness: Merry

Strider he says keep going, Glorfindel he says we must hurry and Frodo doesn't say anything, except with his eyes, and they're enough to make me want to try to run without Elves' or Rangers' words. But it's hard to run when you're tired enough to trip on a blade of grass, and your legs ache like you've had a fever for a month.

Walking's fine, if you've long legs to walk with, but I'd never planned to walk to Rivendell. I miss the ponies we meant to ride. Father will miss them too when we come home without them.



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[ancalime8301]

and Frodo doesn't say anything, except with his eyes, and they're enough to make me want to try to run without Elves' or Rangers' words.

Ohhh... nice.

[rabidsamfan.livejournal.com]

Oh, I'm glad you commented on this one. It's where I started, and then I kind of buried it with the other three, but I was kind of pleased with that line.

Thanks!

[unhobbityhobbit.livejournal.com]

I like the description of his tiredness. And of course that line about Frodo's eyes. You're very good at writing drabbles (I'm too long-winded to keep my word count that small) and have an amazing amount of ideas. I'm in awe.

(and would you mind if I friended you?)

[rabidsamfan.livejournal.com]

Friend away, by all means! I'm not real paranoid about friends lists, either the ones I'm on or my own, and if you enjoy what you're seeing, why not?

I never thought I'd be able to write drabbles, but once I started I found them quite addictive.