Rath Dinen

[rabidsamfan]

lindelea1 wanted a Beregond drabble



This is a fear worse than any I've known. Not even the Nazgul have driven a spike of cold so deep into my heart. To leave my post on the word of a hobbit – a stranger not yet a week in the Guard! To trade blows with the porter, and now to stand here with blood on my sword, defying my own liege lord! I have traded my life for Faramir's, with no way to be sure if the price will be enough. Mithrandir may save him, if he comes, but my honor is shattered beyond repair.

Bergil, forgive me!

Comments

[lindelea1.livejournal.com]

Perfection. Absolute perfection.

All I asked for, and more.

[rabidsamfan.livejournal.com]

Good. I'm glad it was waht you wanted.

[lame-pegasus.livejournal.com]

Gorgeous. Poor man - sometimes keeping your honor means to lose it, at least at first sight. And thinking of his son in this worst of moments - of course he does, he's a loving father. But I never looked that deep beyond the surface. Masterful.

*bows*

[rabidsamfan.livejournal.com]

Thank you. Beregond is one of the more interesting "minor" characters to me. And this was probably his hardest, and finest, hour.

[ansostuff.livejournal.com]

Oh, poor Beregond! That was lovely by the way. He is such a valiant character.

[rabidsamfan.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I like him too.

[dreamflower]

Oh my, RSF, this is wonderful! You've really captured what he might be feeling and thinking at that pivotal moment...

[rabidsamfan.livejournal.com]

Thank you. It's one of the scariest places in the book, for me at least.

[danachan.livejournal.com]

Ah, gorgeous, this is. And just perfect.

[rabidsamfan.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[grimnir1.livejournal.com]

Oh yes! That might have gone through his mind at that time. How much doubt he must have felt if what he did was the right thing to do. Great!

[rabidsamfan.livejournal.com]

Right in one sense and wrong in another. That's the hardest kind of choice to me. Thank you!

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

100 words to gasping and tears. Well and intensely and beautifully done.

*is in awe of you*

[rabidsamfan.livejournal.com]

*offers kleenex*

Thank you!

[mariole.livejournal.com]

Aw. Lovely POV.

[rabidsamfan.livejournal.com]

Thank you!