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By Orodruin’s Glare

Sam was right.

The Ring has changed, now that we are in Mordor. It weighs more, on the chain and on my mind. Before we came within sight of Mount Doom it was only half aware, and the temptations it presented were simple.

The desire to hold…

The desire to hide…

But by the light of the Fire I see myself enlarged, empowered, avenged upon the Orcs who pawed at me, and admired by all whom I once held in awe. This temptation is harder than any, for in many ways the Ring is already mine.

The desire to have



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Date: 2004-09-05 05:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elycia.livejournal.com
oooooo.

This is exquisitely painful and beautifully described. Very nice!

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Date: 2004-09-05 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angharad001.livejournal.com
Very scary really--paints a dramatic picture in my mind--you really fitted a lot of disturbing ideas into this one. Thank you again for your great writing :)

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Date: 2004-09-05 08:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lame-pegasus.livejournal.com
Yes, exactly. Very very good.

The desire to have...

Oh God, yes.

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Date: 2004-09-05 12:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elwenlj.livejournal.com
This is chilling. Very good . . . but chilling.

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Date: 2004-09-05 12:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lily-the-hobbit.livejournal.com
That sent shivers down my spine!

Amazing!

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Date: 2004-09-05 12:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shirebound
Marvelous. The progression of hold... hide... have. Simply marvelous.

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Date: 2004-09-05 05:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luv2hobbits.livejournal.com
*shivers*
That was brilliant!
*shivers*

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Date: 2004-09-06 12:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jane-somebody.livejournal.com
Ooh, creepy (but in a good way!)

Re: By Orodruin's glare

Date: 2004-09-06 06:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eykar.livejournal.com
Sorry, I'm still not convinced. I wrote something along the same lines myself a few months ago and that didn't convince me either. I don't think that either your drabble or mine captures what Frodo's state of mind would have been at that time. Perhaps it's too big a subject to fit in a drabble.

Re: By Orodruin's glare

Date: 2004-09-06 01:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
I'm shattered! *grin*

No, really, of course a drabble can't convey the entirety of what's going on in Frodo's mind once he gets to Mordor. And if you notice, even Professor Tolkien shied away from the task of writing the encyclopedia volume that would do the subject justice. Fortunately, I'm not trying to convey the entirety -- just provide a keyhole glimpse into one aspect of the whole. Like the blind men with the elephant, we begin to construct our understanding by comprehending what we can reach.

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Date: 2004-09-06 01:51 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2004-09-06 01:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
*offers blanket* Thanks!

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Date: 2004-09-06 01:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Thank you. I felt rather pleased with myself when I came up with that. (and then had to entirely rearrange the drabble to make it work, of course!)

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Date: 2004-09-06 01:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
*brr* *offers blanket* Thanks!

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Date: 2004-09-06 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
*offers fuzzy blanket*

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Date: 2004-09-06 02:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it. I think the Ring changed tactics once they got to Mordor, I really do.

Thanks!

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Date: 2004-09-06 02:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
You're welcome! I'm glad you were disturbed and frightened enjoyed the drabble.

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Date: 2004-09-06 02:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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Date: 2004-09-06 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angharad001.livejournal.com
*hugses* still shaking in my boots ;)

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Date: 2004-09-06 07:58 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2004-09-07 10:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illyria-novia.livejournal.com
Oh, God... Oh. Perfect. Gorgeous and chilling, and heartwrenching to read. The temptations, simple, yet powerful, you enumerate them with frightening precision. Brilliant.

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Date: 2004-09-07 12:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Thank you. Once I had the three key sentences I had to rework the whole idea, but they were too potent to ignore. I'm glad you liked it.

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