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Old Friends

Halfred Greenhand was a good gardener, but he’d had a stiff-necked notion of the differences between the Row and Bag End and a heavy hand with his son Holman. Bilbo had been too frightened of the old hobbit to be less than formal, although Holman was near his age, so he’d treated Holman the same as his father until after he’d discovered there were worse dragons in the world. But Holman was set in his ways by then, and he did his best to pass them on to young Hamfast Gamgee, who was still so young he squeaked when Bilbo first interrupted his digging in the garden at Bag End.

It took Holman’s death and twenty years to convince Hamfast to sit while he took a sup of beer from the barrel and Bilbo quizzed him over where best to apportion the trolls’ takings; and it wasn’t until Bell Goodchild came along that ever Hamfast got tipsy enough in Bilbo’s presence to address him without the honorific beforehand. But for all the formality of his words it was different between Bilbo and Hamfast than it had been with Holman or Halfred, and it was Bilbo who first teased him gently about his good hobbit-sense and called him Gaffer long before the title was his due. It was Bilbo too, who brought him home through the bitter rain after Bell was buried, and rolled him into bed and took the children over to the Twofoot’s to wait until Hamfast had slept through the first sharp week of grief, and arranged for a wet-nurse to care for the babe who had survived what her mother had not.

He’d watched as sadness settled the years on Hamfast that never had found Bilbo, and though he’d played at grandfather to the older Gamgee children, he found himself more father to young Sam and Marigold, his hair still dark while Hamfast’s took on streaks of white, and his step still light while his old friend began to falter. His own birthdays came and went, and did not seem to matter, and it was only when he saw young Sam come up the lane the image of the lad that Hamfast had once been that Bilbo totted up the years and realized he was growing old.



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Date: 2004-09-17 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rosiegardener.livejournal.com
Oh, you capture life, birth, death and most of dear Bilbo's life in just three paragraphes ! I love the wistful undertone of that...hmm, let me call it... a vignette perhaps ? (that's what I call my "stories" that are too long to be called a drabble or double drabble but too short to be a fully grown story either)

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Date: 2004-09-17 06:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lame-pegasus.livejournal.com
It was Bilbo too, who brought him home through the bitter rain after Bell was buried, and rolled him into bed and took the children over to the Twofoot’s to wait until Hamfast had slept through the first sharp week of grief, and arranged for a wet-nurse to care for the babe who had survived what her mother had not.

Goodness, is that good.

Whatever it is, a vignette, or a mini-ficlet - it's strong and beautiful. Thank you for sharing this (Again you made my morning).

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Date: 2004-09-17 06:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maripo5a.livejournal.com
I actually said (aloud, at work) "Ooooo," when I finished this. What I meant was, "This is stinging and lovely and sad and strong." Or something like that. Also that I have never thought of the Gaffer this way, and I doubt I will ever be able to forget it. You have skewed my whole take on him. I have always been very angry at the Gaffer for being so harsh to Sam. Now I am stuck somewhere between delighted and irritated that I need to rethink that. Argh.

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Date: 2004-09-17 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ansostuff.livejournal.com
I absolutely LOVED this! I really don`t have much words to describe how beautiful and loevely you portrait Bilbo. Just... wow!

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Date: 2004-09-17 08:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angharad001.livejournal.com
Yes, lovely, poignant . . . *sob*. One day I will be coherent enough to give you the kind of fb you deserve.

*hugs*

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Date: 2004-09-17 09:25 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
It's very late in the night and I can't seem to sleep although I should. So I was browsing on the net, and I found this ficlet. It warmed my heart. Rarely are Bilbo and the Gaffer protagonists, they usually are second fiddles to the younger generation of hobbits. Your concise story made them "Human" to me. Thank you.
*Will try to sleep now that I have positive thoughts*

Nimue

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jewelsong.livejournal.com
I loved this. I LOVED it. I love bits about the "gaffer" and this was just wonderful.

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Date: 2004-09-17 11:28 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shirebound
Marvelous. What an interesting way for Bilbo to see the passage of years -- by viewing it passing for his old friend.

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Date: 2004-09-17 12:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
What she said!

*gaping in awe*

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Date: 2004-09-17 01:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elendiari22.livejournal.com
Poor Hamfast! This is really lovely, a nice look into the relationship between Bilbo and his gardener.

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Date: 2004-09-17 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippinswolf.livejournal.com
thank for touching on the friendship between Bilbo and Hamfast- the Gamgee/Baggins friendship that is seldom written in the fandom.

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Date: 2004-09-17 01:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teasel.livejournal.com
This is fantastic. I think it shows exactly what a short form like a ficlet can do -- so much about Bilbo's character is conveyed through his relationship with Holman and Hamfast and Sam, and all in such a brief space, so Bilbo's surprise at the passage of time at the end really hits with impact of a bomb. I think you make readers experience that surprise rather than just tell them about it, and the last line, ending with the word "old" is absolutely perfectly constructed. Great stuff. *fangirls you*

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Date: 2004-09-17 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariole.livejournal.com
Wow. *feels age settle on me like a breath*

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
It's a ficlet I suppose. Even a vignette should have something that resembles a plot, and this is more of a contemplation...

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
I hope the rest of your day went well too!

Thanks!

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
The Gaffer is harsh, or at least his language is, but I think Sam resembles him. Remember the rope he tied on Gollum's leg in the Emyn Muil? The one that nearly wasn't tight enough?...

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:17 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
I'm beginning to be very interested in Bilbo for some reason. He's fun to think about, certainly, particularly when you're thinking about what he was like between the Hobbit and FotR.

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Incoherence is still appreciated! Thank you!

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Thank you. I hope you had pleasant dreams.

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
The Gaffer is a bit of a challenge. There's so much we don't know about him after all...

Thanks!

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
That's the way I see my own years go -- by watching my nieces and nephews grow!

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Thank you. They seem to have got on quite nicely!

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Now I'm tempted to write another one. But I need to think of a good hook!

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Oh thank you. I'd love to say I planned it to turn out that way, but I didn't. I just kept changing that last sentence until I could live with it.

Fanfiction makes a short form workable because there are so many things which don't have to be said. But I can think of a few examples outside of fanfic. Do you know the World's Shortest Ghost Story?

He awoke suddenly, and reached over for the matches. And the matches were put into his hand...

;)

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Date: 2004-09-17 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Not as many years as Bilbo did, I trust! Thank you!

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Date: 2004-09-18 03:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elycia.livejournal.com
until after he’d discovered there were worse dragons in the world.

I worship you for this line. Wow.

What a marvelous piece. It's like a mini-history of Hobbiton class relations. Extremely well done! Thanks for sharing it.

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Date: 2004-09-18 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
You're welcome. I don't think of it so much as Hobbiton, as specifically between Bilbo and the Gaffer, but I guess you're right.

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Date: 2004-09-18 04:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maripo5a.livejournal.com
There you go again! Dang it (as Sam might say), now I'm going to have to go and change my mind. About as easy as putting bloomers on a pig, but sometimes the pig's just gotta wear them bloomers. :-)

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Date: 2004-09-18 07:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
*laughs out loud at the thought of a be-bloomered pig*

When I went into full out fannish mode with LotR I took a colored pencil and marked the edge of the page to show who was speaking or perceiving as an experiment, and did it for first Sam and Frodo, and then the rest of the Fellowship and Gollum and Bilbo. It was fun, but it has left me with a tendency to re-read now by picking a person or an object (The Ring or Lembas) and going through looking for references. The Gaffer was a natural subject for me!

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Date: 2004-09-18 12:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippinswolf.livejournal.com
There could be the time that Bilbo asked Hamfast to teach him how to fish, and accidentally got the line tangled in Hamfast's hair...or isn't that the hook you meant? ;-)
We shall look forward to it!

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Date: 2004-09-24 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] princessofg.livejournal.com
teasel sent me. all i can say is WOW and THANK YOU.

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Date: 2004-10-04 02:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Thank you! And I love your icon!

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Date: 2004-11-19 06:10 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] oliviaramirez
and arranged for a wet-nurse to care for the babe who had survived what her mother had not.
So seldom that you get to see the thoughtful, caring side of Bilbo, thanks for writing this. It's lovely.

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Date: 2004-11-20 01:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Yes. I see playboy Bilbo a lot, or scholar Bilbo, but not often the fellow who was well-liked by folks like the Gamgees and who gave all the troll's treasure away...

Thank you!

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