Building nicely, and very good description of the memories of the war. "Smell are surer than sounds or sights to make your heartstrings crack..." More small pieces displayed to us as they trickle back into his consciousness.
But you could post these things in slightly larger chunks, you know. If you're going to do one scene at a time, you need to post more often.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2008-12-08 03:18 pm (UTC)"Smell are surer than sounds or sights to make your heartstrings crack..."
More small pieces displayed to us as they trickle back into his consciousness.
But you could post these things in slightly larger chunks, you know. If you're going to do one scene at a time, you need to post more often.