What I love about your comments is that you always manage to find the structure in a ficlet that I didn't even realize I was creating at the time, but leaps out at me in retrospect. It must be subconscious, because I kept rearranging sentences to get it that way, but until you pointed it out I didn't understand why!
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Date: 2005-03-05 03:04 am (UTC)