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rabidsamfan ([personal profile] rabidsamfan) wrote2004-12-19 01:29 pm

Bergil's story

part one (There are links at the end of each section.)



The kitchen was through a different door than Bergil had thought it was, but he found it, and a spoon, without making too much noise and was soon back. Sam had gone over to stand beside the bed, a dripping fold of cloth in his hand.

“I don’t have a fever, Sam,” Frodo was protesting.

“Fever or no, the cool will feel good,” Sam said. “And you can use it on your eyes if you like, to keep the light out.” He nodded to Bergil, and indicated the cup of tea on the table with a motion of his head. “Give that tea a good stir, lad, and we’ll see how it tastes.”

“If Aragorn comes down and finds me with a fever rag on my head he’ll keep me in bed for a week,” Frodo grumbled. “It’s just the wine, Sam.”

“I expect so, Mr. Frodo,” Sam said, sounding as if Frodo weren‘t the only one getting crotchety. “And if it frets you that much I’ll fetch it off you once you’ve got to sleep, but there’s no use in feeling worse when you could be feeling better.”

“No you won’t, because the minute I drink that tea you’re going to have a cup of it yourself and get some sleep,” Frodo ordered.

“Now, Mr. Frodo,” Sam began, but Bergil, fetching the tea he was stirring over, found himself saying, “I could do it.”

Both of them looked at him with raised brows and he felt his ears go red, but he knew that he wasn’t just being foolish. “I would be careful, like I was in the House of Healing. I wouldn’t waken you again,” he told the Ringbearer. He had changed the fever rags when they had grown dry when he was helping Ioreth those two awful days; it wasn‘t taking the old one away that woke people, but putting a new one into place, and that only sometimes. “I have to stay awake in any case, until the next boy comes to take my place,” he reminded Sam. “It’s my job to help in any way I can. And if you don’t both sleep at the same time, then you won’t be awake at the same time.”

Sam made a face, but Frodo laughed. “He’s got you there, Sam. And I‘d sleep better if I knew you were getting some rest.”

Sam sighed, but he nodded and a smile tugged at the corner of his mouth, “Very well, then, Mr. Frodo. If you insist.”

Frodo reached for the cup and Bergil gave it to him, trying very hard not to spill anything and wondering if it would be more proper to kneel as he offered it. Master Tollovand hadn’t explained which courtesies were due the Companions, and he had already forgotten to bow. He’d have to ask one of the other boys before tomorrow night.

Frodo sniffed at it and wrinkled his nose. “Do I smell catsbalm in there, Sam?”

“Aye, though Mardil called it all-heal and valerian and a dozen other things. Just a small slice of root, to help the willow do its work,” Sam said equably. “There were a couple of cockleburs in the mix too, though I expect you shan’t be able to taste them through the honey.”

Frodo sipped at the cooling tea. “No, no I can’t. Wish I could say the same of the willow.” He drank off a portion of it in a few gulps and then held out the cup toward Sam. “That’s plenty, I think. This cup is sized for Big Folk and I think the brew must be too. Try it and you‘ll see.”

Sam took it. “I didn’t think I let it steep too long,” he said, but he drank carefully and brought the cup down before he’d drained it. “Tis a bit strong,” he admitted. “Still, there’s more in the pot if we need it now. We can add water to thin it.” He set the cup on the bedside table. “Let’s just get you settled, sir, and then I’ll go to my own bed.”

“Bergil, you see that he does,” Frodo commanded as Sam fussed with pillows and blankets and put the damp cloth on his master’s forehead. “No washing cups, or straightening things, or seeing to breakfast since he‘s up already.”

“Now would I do that?” Sam asked, as he loosened the tieback on the bed curtains.

“Of course you would,” Frodo answered, closing his eyes and settling deeper into the bed. “But not tonight, Sam. Sleep well.”

“Yes, Mr. Frodo,” Sam said fondly, as he closed the curtain. “Good night.”

part twelve





BTW, if anyone's got some good ideas about just what forms of address Bergil should be using to the Companions I'd love to hear them. He calls Merry "Master Perian" at one point, but Merry hadn't been knighted then...

[identity profile] serai1.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 06:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Yet another lovely chapterlet. I do like the interactions here very much.

By the by, I have valerian growing in my garden, and the leaves and flowers are actually sweet-smelling. It's the root that's the stinky part (smells like old gym socks), and it's also the part that's used as a calmant. :)

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 06:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, caught out! Yes, I am getting my herbal information from google, thank you...
*tries to think of the equivalent of "half a leaf" in terms of roots -- it is one big root or a whole lot of little skinny ones?*

[identity profile] serai1.livejournal.com 2004-12-20 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
I would say "a small slice", since roots are dried and then cut into pieces.

[identity profile] serai1.livejournal.com 2004-12-20 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
I used to work in an herb store when I lived in Santa Cruz, and have done some herbal medicine and formulas, so if you want advice for writing fics, I'd be happy to help. :)

[identity profile] febobe.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 06:48 pm (UTC)(link)
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The VERY best part thus far!!! :D

Sam had gone over to stand beside the bed, a dripping fold of cloth in his hand.

“I don’t have a fever, Sam,” Frodo was protesting.


You wanna bet, sweetheart? ;D

“Fever or no, the cool will feel good,” Sam said. “And you can use it on your eyes if you like, to keep the light out.” He nodded to Bergil, and indicated the cup of tea on the table with a motion of his head. “Give that tea a good stir, lad, and we’ll see how it tastes.”

*fans self* Is it just me, or is it AWFULLY hot in here?

“If Aragorn comes down and finds me with a fever rag on my head he’ll keep me in bed for a week,” Frodo grumbled. “It’s just the wine, Sam.”

ROTFL!!!! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!! :D

“I expect so, Mr. Frodo,” Sam said, sounding as if Frodo weren‘t the only one getting crotchety. “And if it frets you that much I’ll fetch it off you once you’ve got to sleep, but there’s no use in feeling worse when you could be feeling better.”

*double ROTFLs!!!!* :D Oh, I'll bet, with fretful Frodo on his hands. . . . Fussy Ringbearer keeping poor Sam up half the night. . . . It's PERFECT. . . . :D Poor little Frodo, though. . . .

“No you won’t, because the minute I drink that tea you’re going to have a cup of it yourself and get some sleep,” Frodo ordered.

*GRIN* :D LOL. . .oh, Frodo. . . . :D

“Let’s just get you settled, sir, and then I’ll go to my own bed.”

“Bergil, you see that he does,” Frodo commanded as Sam fussed with pillows and blankets and put the damp cloth on his master’s forehead. “No washing cups, or straightening things, or seeing to breakfast since he‘s up already.”

“Now would I do that?” Sam asked, as he loosened the tieback on the bed curtains.

“Of course you would,” Frodo answered, closing his eyes and settling deeper into the bed. “But not tonight, Sam. Sleep well.”

“Yes, Mr. Frodo,” Sam said fondly, as he closed the curtain. “Good night.”


GUH. *bibbles, falls over, twitching helplessly, and DIES*

I want to kiss your feet. But I'm not worthy.

Love,
Febobe :D

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 08:05 pm (UTC)(link)
GUH. *bibbles, falls over, twitching helplessly, and DIES*


Oops. Note to self. Try not to kill off audience...


;D
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[identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
awwww... poor feverish Frood! *mops his brow, too*

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 08:10 pm (UTC)(link)
*snort* I can just see him looking out at the line of willing brow-moppers and wondering whether or not he oughtn't just give up wine altogether...

ontheotherhand...

;)

[identity profile] lame-pegasus.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 08:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.. (BTW - valerian and willow bark is a fine idea for an anti-fever-tea, you could also add some licorice as natural sweetener).

...when he was helping Iorhael those two awful days...

Do you mean Ioreth?

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Must...stop...typing...without...glasses...

Yes. (fixes entry)

Thank you, btw, and I may end up consulting you about herbs. I really do know nothing about them!

[identity profile] lame-pegasus.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 09:33 pm (UTC)(link)
*laughs* I'm not that skilled - I only had a father who knew everything about herbs, and there are some basics I haven't forgotten... and the rest is Google.

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
It's amazing what you can absorb from a parent, though. My father was a microbiologist, and he once gave my sister and I a multiple guess test that he was going to give his students (who were in medical school -- we were in high school at the time). She scored a 85% and I got over 70%...

But Google is good...

[identity profile] lame-pegasus.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 10:16 pm (UTC)(link)
A heartfelt Hip Hip Hooray for Google (and the wonderful Diana Gabaldon, btw, whose Outlander-series-heroine Claire Beauchamp-Fraser is a very gifted doctor - sprung from the 20th century into the 18th - for this amazingly talented author did a lot of my research for Winter Fire and BIGS...)

AND - I've just mailed you the german translation of Chosen for your personal archive - I fear should I start writing emails on Christmas Eve (last update of my site this year) or putting links into my LJ, my husband will kill me. *grins*

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 11:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Er.. yes, I can see why he might feel that Christmas Eve was a time for other things. We always put up our tree that day when I was a kid, LOL! But I hope you mean snailmail, as there is nothing in my inbox so far.

I shall have to look for the Gabaldon books. Yours is not the first recommendation I've seen, but I never seem to remember the name when I'm in the bookstore!

[identity profile] gentlehobbit.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 08:52 pm (UTC)(link)
“Tis a bit strong,” he admitted. “Still, there’s more in the pot if we need it now. We can add water to thin it.”

*chuckle* Now I'm just waiting for whatever unintentional side-effects that are going to occur from this mixture... ;)

Good old Bergil - herding those silly hobbits into bed. :)

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 09:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, they might sleep a bit later than they planned. *wink*

Thank you!

[identity profile] qinfinity.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Lol. Bergil is indeed a sweet one, worrying about if he's acting just the right way in front of the hobbits. This just keeps getting better and better with every part.

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. Once I get Sam tucked into bed I'm going to have to have a serious think about where to go next, but I'm enjoying Bergil too much to give up on him entirely.
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[personal profile] dreamflower 2004-12-19 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
My Bergil calls Pippin "Sir Pippin"--a special nickname for him from Bergil, though he uses "Sir Peregrin" if they are both on duty. I would think "Master Samwise", and probably "Sir Meriadoc". Frodo he would probably call "Ringbearer" until Frodo objected, and then either "Master Frodo" or "Master Baggins". Merry and Sam might be able to persuade him to be a bit less formal in private, and I know Pippin could, but I can't imagine him getting over his awe enough to address Frodo without an honorific.

I really liked this little chapter: Frodo objecting to the cold cloth because he's afraid of Aragorn putting on his healer hat, LOL! And his knowledge that Sam will probably do anything *but* rest. Bergil's offer is so natural and perfectly in keeping with his character. I think of him as a rather solemn responsible lad most of the time, who takes his duties seriously.

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-12-19 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Those sound like good suggestions. I wish I knew what the Sindarin would be for "Ringbearer", though...
shirebound: (Did someone say hobbit?)

[personal profile] shirebound 2004-12-19 11:34 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm finally catching up with this story! (And of course I love this chapter the best because it's so Frodo-ish.)

My favorites:

“If Aragorn comes down and finds me with a fever rag on my head he’ll keep me in bed for a week,” Frodo grumbled.

Bergil gave it to him, trying very hard not to spill anything and wondering if it would be more proper to kneel as he offered it.

“Bergil, you see that he does,” Frodo commanded as Sam fussed with pillows and blankets and put the damp cloth on his master’s forehead. “No washing cups, or straightening things, or seeing to breakfast since he‘s up already.”


:)

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-12-20 12:17 am (UTC)(link)
It's still very much a WIP, I'm afraid. I sort of know what's next, but I haven't committed it to pixels yet. Which is ridiculous, as I've had all day to write. (Ah, well. My bathroom is cleaner anyway.)

I'm glad you're enjoying it!

[identity profile] cpsings4him.livejournal.com 2005-01-26 01:54 pm (UTC)(link)
*sighs contentedly at this chapter*

Perfect! The interaction between Frodo and Sam is spot on. Bergil is wondeful as well!

*loves this!*