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rabidsamfan ([personal profile] rabidsamfan) wrote2004-10-28 09:56 pm

Nine Walkers

Merry, on Caradhras

Cold be hand and heart and bone… and other parts of me too, that would be much happier warm. It seems like every other time we’ve been in trouble something’s tried to chill us to the core. The wight in the barrow, and the Riders and now the mountain – or whatever is hiding here.

I’m glad that Gandalf has made a fire, but standing here in the cold and dark reminds me of Weathertop and how nightblind we were when we turned away from the flames to try to see what was attacking us. My teeth were chattering then too.

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[identity profile] mariole.livejournal.com 2004-10-29 03:53 am (UTC)(link)
*distributes hot toddies to the entire Fellowship * wah!*
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[personal profile] dreamflower 2004-10-29 06:45 am (UTC)(link)
Oh how very Merry! I love his practical worry over being nightblind! And his singular observation about evil and cold. For him, this is practically a premonition--lovely!

[identity profile] ansostuff.livejournal.com 2004-10-29 07:30 am (UTC)(link)
Cold be hand and heart and bone… and other parts of me too,
LOL!

Poor Fellowship! I have just read all your Charadras-drabbles in one go and I love them just as much as I love the rest of your drabbles! You give us such a great inight into all their thoughts and feelings. Thank you!

[identity profile] maripo5a.livejournal.com 2004-10-29 07:32 am (UTC)(link)
I'm loving the Caradhras series. I especially liked Boromir and this one. (Why yes, I am a bit Merry-obsessed, why do you ask?) With Boromir I liked the fact that you revealed his motivation for speaking so well; this one I like because it links events so well, in such a hobbity way. :-)

[identity profile] lame-pegasus.livejournal.com 2004-10-29 09:40 am (UTC)(link)
Very fine. You even blend his memories of the Barrow Wight in -and they must have haunted him for a rather long time. *applauds*

[identity profile] pippinswolf.livejournal.com 2004-10-29 11:45 am (UTC)(link)
It's the way you introduce everyday things into your drabbles that make them especially touching- who but Merry would wonder about night blindness from the fire and not being able to see who was coming-again?

[identity profile] danachan.livejournal.com 2004-10-29 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, Merry. How -- how perfectly him.

I must applaud you, my dear. This is a brilliant set.

[identity profile] gentlehobbit.livejournal.com 2004-10-29 07:15 pm (UTC)(link)
standing here in the cold and dark reminds me of Weathertop and how nightblind we were when we turned away from the flames to try to see what was attacking us.

Brrr. Yes, there is a definite theme of cold throughout the books. But that idea of being nightblind... that's downright shivery. Brrr...

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2004-10-30 04:17 am (UTC)(link)
*makes note* I think you've just adjusted my characterization of Merry.

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-11-02 02:16 am (UTC)(link)
*grin*

Adjusted, hey? In which direction I wonder?

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-11-02 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
Turning from a bright light to fight something must have been really difficult. Glad you liked this one!

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-11-02 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm getting more comfortable with writing Merry, I think. Well, I hope anyway!

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-11-02 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
In some ways Merry had a really hard Quest. I mean, Old Man Willow, the Barrow Wights, the Riders in Bree, and on Weathertop, Uruk-hai and orcs, AND the Witch King! Yikes! I'd be worried too!

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-11-02 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
The wight is incredibly scary when you think about it. At least to me!

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-11-02 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I like Boromir better know that I can imagine Sean Bean in the role. And I'm liking Merry better every time I try to write him!

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-11-02 02:21 am (UTC)(link)
You're welcome. I wanted to write the Nine Walkers to complement the series I wrote about the Nazgul, and this was the best "time" in the story to think about them.

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-11-02 02:22 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, visionary hobbits! I think Merry gets a little neglected sometimes, so it's fun to try to see from his point of view.

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-11-02 02:23 am (UTC)(link)
I could have used one of those on Saturday night myself!

Thanks!

[identity profile] maripo5a.livejournal.com 2004-11-02 07:41 am (UTC)(link)
I think you write Merry well. And I agree, having Sean Bean's face to put onto Boromir makes it easier to, well... relate to him. Sean put so much into the character--conflict, and interest, and menace, and charm... Certainly made it fascinating.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2004-11-02 03:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Not particularly a direction, just adjusted it.

And, as ever, inspired me. :)

[identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com 2004-11-02 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh! Goody!

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