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rabidsamfan ([personal profile] rabidsamfan) wrote2005-10-20 10:58 pm

I think it's going to take me a while to master the "dribble" form...

But here's a first attempt:


I dreamed a lot about coming back to the Shire.
About good Shire earth under my toes once more,
Good beer in my belly and good songs.
No Men strutting around like fat roosters.
No Hobbits afraid of other hobbits.
No Chief calling the tune.
No barren Shirref houses.
No felled trees.
No Rules.
No.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2005-10-21 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
Yes! *cheers*

[identity profile] i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com 2005-10-21 04:00 am (UTC)(link)
It's good and full spirited. :)

Sam?

[identity profile] lilybaggins.livejournal.com 2005-10-21 04:31 am (UTC)(link)
I like it... it seems rather angsty to me.

[identity profile] lame-pegasus.livejournal.com 2005-10-21 04:47 am (UTC)(link)
Glorious, really. *applauds*

Sam, isn't it?
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[personal profile] dreamflower 2005-10-21 04:56 am (UTC)(link)
Brilliant! If you haven't mastered it yet, I can't wait to see what you come up with when you do--this is superb. I've yet to get my toes wet with this, but I hope to.

[identity profile] ansostuff.livejournal.com 2005-10-21 07:23 am (UTC)(link)
I say that was a lovely and emotional attempt! Poor Sam!

[identity profile] gayalondiel.livejournal.com 2005-10-21 08:08 am (UTC)(link)
Yay, determined!Sam!!!

:D
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[personal profile] oliviaramirez 2005-10-21 09:20 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, angry Sam. I love it.
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[personal profile] shirebound 2005-10-21 11:47 am (UTC)(link)
Very powerful.

[identity profile] surgicalsteel.livejournal.com 2005-10-21 03:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, amazing stuff!

[identity profile] danachan.livejournal.com 2005-10-21 06:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh. That was glorious.
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[identity profile] slipperieslope.livejournal.com 2005-10-21 06:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes!